Nalaienum Marakkamal.....
Topic started by Rethnakumar (@ sonic.head.co.jp) on Thu Nov 7 03:51:59 .
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Tholainthu pona, pomaiku alum
siruvanin ekkam..
Thayin ithamana madisoottirku enkum
makanain thukkam..
vidumuraiku vantha makan vittu senra sattai kandu
marugum thayin vethanai..
Nalla pasiyil thavara vitta kolutha eli kuritha
poonai in sogam ....
Thappi pona malaikaga nodiku orumurai megam parkum
vivasaiin verumai...
Ivai evatrukum kurainthathillai
Un mailukaga kathirukum enathu thavipu.......
Nalakenum marakkamal kaditham Podavum...
Responses:
- From: Kavignan (@ proxy.ece.iisc.ernet.in)
on: Thu Nov 7 07:35:02
Dear RK,
Idhil yenna kavithai irukkiradhu? MaLigaikkadai list poala sila sogangaLai list seidhu vittu, adhuvum un mail varaadha sogamum ondru yengireergaL. Algorithmic poetry yendru sollalaam idhai. Ungal SONTHA UNARVU idhil yengaeyaavadhu irukkiradhaa yendru nenjaith thottu yosiyungaL. Verum vaarththaik kuppai idhu. Padikkavaavadhu suvaiyaaga irundhaalum paravaaillai (Vairamuththu seivadhu poala). Adhuvum illai. Yenna izhavu idhu?
-K
Kadumaiyaana vaarththaigalukku varundhugiraen. Aanaal indhak kuppaiyai vaeru yeppadi vimarsanam seyya.
- From: Rethnakumar (@ sonic.head.co.jp)
on: Thu Nov 7 19:34:14
Nanri Kavignan Avargale
- From: Kajan (@ toronto-ppp217962.sympatico.ca)
on: Sat Nov 9 10:45:49
Good thought.
I feel attentionion at some wordings may be more clear.
- From: Rethnakumar (@ sonic.head.co.jp)
on: Mon Nov 11 03:12:13
Tholar Kajan avargaluku enathu Vanakangal..
- From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1)
on: Wed Nov 13 06:27:02
Indha uraiyadalai saRRu gavanamaga kaiyandirundhaal idhu oeu azagana kavithaiyaga vandhirukkum..
any how tried well better luck next time..
come on rethna kumar .. u can write better.. start write .. now.. FEW tips.. which thaya already told others in this forum...
before posting... Read number of times, you will know where to modify the poem to make it better :)
Hope you take it in right sense..
Natpudan iyappan
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