Topic started by FlowerGuy (@ 61.11.82.64) on Mon Feb 3 12:04:22 .
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vaazhkkai salikkum veLaiyile
vaanathai naan paarpathundu.
vannamattra vaanavil ondru-
vandhennai paarthu sirikkum.

edharkku ippadi sirikkindraai?
endru adhai kedpathundu.
edharkku nee sirippathillai?
ennai adhu thiruppi kedkum.

enge tholaithaai un vannangalai?
endru naan vinaa thoduthaal,
adagu kadaiyil vaithuvittu -
avasthaipadugiren endru sirikkum.

eppadi kelvi kettaalum-
edhir kelvi kettu sirikkum,
vaanavilludan naanum serndhu-
vaai-vittu sirippathundu.

vannamattra vaanavillai
varnikka vaarthaiyillai.
niramattra vaanavillai
varaiyavum varnamillai.

7 swarangalin udhaviyodu -
raagam paada mudiyavillai.
7 adhisayangal thunaiyodu- adhan
azhagai solla iyalavillai.
7 jenmam eduthaalum -
vannamattra vaanavillai
vivarikka mudiyuma theriyavillai.

inimaiyaana oru kaalai pozuthil
inba adhirchi tharuvathu pol
vannamattra vaanavil - andru
vannangalodu vandhathu.

nirangal niraiya therindhaalum-
mugathil punnahai kaanavillai.
vannam vazhindha vaanavillil-
vaseegarikkum sirippumillai.

iraivan ennai virumbuvathaal
inimel ingu varamaatten.
idhuve num iruvarukkum
kadaisi sandhippu endrathu.

maranathai muthamida
manasukkul koochama?
aayusai kuraithuvitta
kadavul meethu kobama?

kelvigalai naan mudithavudan,
vazhakkampol sirithukonde
vaanavil badhil sonnathu-

"artham indri,adaiyaalam indri
pala naatkal vaazhvadhai vida-
sila naatkale endraalum
sirappaaga vaazhndhu maraiya vendum"

pesi
muditha vaanavil-
vedithu sidhari vizunthathu.
vaanavillin 7 niramum -
kannai vittu marainthathu.

anbai thedi,azhagai thedi,
arivai thedi,adaiyaalam thedi,

arthumulla vaazhvai thedi,
amaran endra vaarthai thedi,

puthiyothoru payanathai
punnahaiyudan thodangivitten.

Responses:

• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Mon Feb 3 16:15:23
  
  kubla kahn kavidhai pOla irukku, oru kaRpanai ulagai padaithirukkiReergaL. kavidhai azhagu, kadaisiyil solli irukkum karuthum azhagu (vaazhum naaLkaLaivida vaazhum vidhamE mukkiyam!). aanaal kavidhai thuvakkathiRkum, mudivukkum idayE uLLa iNaippu theLivaaga illaathathaaga thOnRugiRathu!
  
  
• From: Vennila (@ 195.224.105.243) on: Tue Feb 4 02:24:27
  
  I Liked Your Poem Very Much Mr.Flowerguy.Poem Is Very Good.But Poem Is Very Long.Surukamaa Iruntaal Kavitai Melum Sirapaaga
  
  Irukum Enbatu Enatu Tazmaiyana Karutu. Surukamaa Ezuta Try Pannunga Mr.Flowerguy.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Tue Feb 4 09:28:36
  
  Hi flower guy...
  meendum varavErpathil magizchi
  
  sari vishayathukku varuvOm...
  neenga ezuthiyaindha kavithai bharathiyaarin kayiriu appadinga oru vasana kavithai maathiri oru kadhaiyaay... azagiya kavithaiyaay sErnthu amarkkala paduththi irukkinga... vazththukkal..
  
  saRRE neelam enRa ennam varalaam... aanal adhu kavithaiyin azagai kuRaikka villai....
  
  vaazththukkal
  thodarungal
  anbudan
  Iyappan
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ wc05.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Tue Feb 4 10:46:20
  
  I am pressed by
  
  "iraivan ennai virumbuvathaal
  inimel ingu varamaatten"
  
  and
  
  "pesi muditha vaanavil...."
  
  By the way what do u mean by "artham "
  
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 61.11.82.172) on: Mon Feb 10 12:58:31
  
  E.C and Iyappan,thanks a lot for your comments.
  Actually 'the columbia shuttle explosion' killing 7 astronauts triggered me to write this.
  idhu muzukka muzukka karpanaithaan endraalum kadaisiyil 'oru thuli nijam' irukku.
  (the 7 colours implies those 7 astronauts).
  'avasara samaiyal' maadhiri, avasara avasaramaaga ezhuthiya kavithai.
  adhanaal naduvil thelivinmai,thodarchiyinmai thenpadalaam.
  adutha murai ezhuthumpozhuthu kuzhappangal varaamal paarthu kolgiren.
  
  Vennila, surukkamaaga ezutha vendiya idathil nichayam surukkamaaga ezuthuven.
  vimarsanathukku mikka nandri.
  
  Kajan, 'Artham' endra vaarthaikku 'Artham' kettaal eppadi? :-)
  'Arthamattra' Vaazhkkai = life without a meaning.
  'Arthamulla' Vaazhkkai = life that has a meaning.
  
  neengal rasitha varigalai meendum paarthapozuthu, siru maattram seyya thoondiyathu.
  iraivan ennai virumbuvathaal
  inimel ingu varamaatten.
  idhuve num iruvarukkum
  irudhi sandhippu endrathu. ('irudhi' instead of 'kadaisi'). thanks for commenting Kajan.
  
  indha vaaram 'kumudham' kalpana chawla pattriya thalaiyangathil Kajan rasitha varigalai
  appadiye paarthavudan enakkum aachariyam...
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ cpe0050ba1669c3-cm014110219722.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Wed Feb 12 10:56:47
  
  >>'Artham' endra vaarthaikku
  thx for respoding.
  
  
• From: ec (@ bryant.rz-berlin.mpg.de) on: Wed Feb 12 11:05:06
  
  "artham indri,adaiyaalam indri
  pala naatkal vaazhvadhai vida-
  sila naatkale endraalum
  sirappaaga vaazhndhu maraiya vendum"
  
  ippOthu indha varigaLin artham nangu purigiRathu, viLakkathiRku nanRi Flower Guy!
  
  

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