Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Sun Jul 20 08:10:31 .
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Naavil amilam kakkum AvaLai,
Verthu odhungi ponadhu ulagam.
Naavil thEnoora pesum ivargal
Nenjil allavO vishathai padhikinar?

Vishathai kakkum vazhakkam MElA?
Thenin poochAi melE sirithu
Vishathai muzhungum Neegal MElA?

VishamE vendA vazhvu vendum
Ullum puramum VeLLai vendum
Thigattum ThEnO, Kottum ThElO,
Arindu kollum pakkuvam vendum

Ellam irunda pozhudum, IRaivaa
Manidharai avarin gunathirkErpa,
Kuraiyum niraiyum Etru nadakkum
PaNindha pakkuvam nirandhu vendum!

_Shakthi_

Responses:

• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Sun Jul 20 08:11:58 EDT 2003
  
  "PaNindha pakkuvam nirandhu vendum!
  "<<<<<<<<<<<<
  
  sorrie
  
  PaNindha pakkuvam Niraindhu vendum!
  
  
• From: flowerguy (@ balance2.baplc.com) on: Sun Jul 20 11:56:06 EDT 2003
  
  kavithai rasikkumpadi irukku.
  mudhal paathi suvaiyaaga sendraalum, irandaavadhu paathi "vendum format"kku selgirathu.
  
  this "vendum format" is so popular in tamil poetry....every poet tries that once...
  
  manadhil urudhi vendum - bharathiyar.
  naan pesa ninaipethellaam, nee pesa vendum - kannadasan.
  putham pudhu boomi vendum - vairamuthu.
  saptham illadha thanimai vendum - vairamuthu.
  last august-15th namathu iyappanum ippadi niraiya vendinaar.
  
  ellaam sari.....kavidhaikkum, kavidhaiyin thalaippukkum enna sambandham?
  
  "when somebody is ready to accept somebody in default format" as mentioned in the title,
  then why to set expectations in "vendum format" ? sounds contradictory?
  
  VishamE vendA vazhvu vendum
  Ullum puramum VeLLai vendum
  
  vellaiyo..karuppo...vishamo..inippo...."accept others as they are"...
  
  when we set expectations,we no more accept others as they are..(so title should be changed).
  
  suggested title is : "enakkaaga maariya unnai pidikkum" or "unakkaaga maariya ennai pidikkum"
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ 24.156.114.180) on: Sun Jul 20 14:11:52 EDT 2003
  
  >Naavil thEnoora pesum ivargal
  Nenjil allavO vishathai padhikinar>
  
  we have to make more ditance from these ppl or else we have to have as ur request
  
  >Ellam irunda pozhudum, IRaivaa
  Manidharai avarin gunathirkErpa,
  Kuraiyum niraiyum Etru nadakkum
  PaNindha pakkuvam nirandhu vendum>
  
  FG have put a good list for vendum kavithaikaL.
  
  most probably u wont get similarities to 100% with anyone else. So title seems to be ok.
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Jul 21 07:05:31 EDT 2003
  
  shakthi,
  good one
  
  keep writing...
  
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Jul 23 03:02:58 EDT 2003
  
  kajan, iyappan,
  
  
  NandRi
  
  Flowerguy,
  
  Vendum formats start with demands to God
  
  which finishes as....
  
  "Ellam irunda pozhudum, IRaivaa
  Manidharai avarin gunathirkErpa,
  Kuraiyum niraiyum Etru nadakkum
  PaNindha pakkuvam nirandhu vendum! "<<<<<<
  
  So GOD GIMME THE STRENGTH TO ACCEPT PPL AS THEY ARE
  
  hence the title!
  
  YAarukaagavum yaarum maaramaatargal, maaravum koodadu!
  
  IF u become what i want, then u are me!
  U are different from me cause, u are u and i am me!
  
  :)
  
  I often remember the best saying which suits this the most
  
  GOD GIVE ME
  
  THE SERENITY TO ACCEPT THINGS WHICH I CANNOT CHANGE
  THE COURAGE TO CHANGE THINGS I CAN, AND
  THE WISDOM TO KNOW THE DIFFERENCE!
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Jul 23 03:05:05 EDT 2003
  
  Hey thx for the vendum list........i enjoyed it
  
  the best vendum kavidai i loved is
  
  SATTHAM ILLAADA TANIMAI VENDUM.......
  WHICH ENDS WITH
  
  IDHILE EDUVUM KIDAIKAVILLAI,
  VAZHVE VAZHVE VENDAAM ENDRU
  MARANAM MARANAM MARANAM KETEN
  
  
• From: flowerguy (@ balance2.baplc.com) on: Fri Jul 25 16:05:49 EDT 2003
  
  So there are 4 characters in this poem.
  
  Character-1 - a short tempered character...which forgets what it talks..
  Character-2 - people who talk sweet things with smiles..but grow a poison tree in heart.
  Character-3 - a person who believe in God.
  Character-4 - GOD.
  
  Line 1 and 2 explains Character-1 very clearly.
  Line 3 and 4 explains Character-2 very clearly.
  
  In Lines 5,6 and 7 Character-3 is comparing Character-1 with Character-2.
  In Rest of the lines, Character-3 prays to Character-4 (GOD)..to distinguish Character-1 and Character-2.
  
  shakthi, ungal viLakka uraikku mikka nandri.
  i can understand this poem better now.
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Mon Jul 28 08:14:59 EDT 2003
  
  Flowerguy
  
  ooops man you are great.......
  we saw poem as just poem.... you gone in deep with it... after reading your comments i am reading this poem again.... wow.... shakthi....
  
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: Push (@ bras1-vr0-ip1-71.access.batelco.com.bh) on: Tue Jul 29 02:29:02 EDT 2003
  
  "eppadi naan thaan athunu kandupidithirkal"
  
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Jul 29 06:32:41 EDT 2003
  
  jesus christ!!!!
  
  flower guy,
  
  en poem (!) akku veru aaani vera pirichu padichuteenga
  
  neverthless
  
  1 and 2 lines talks not on characters of individual, it talks on nature of ppl!
  
  iyappan,
  
  inda kindal danE vendam garadu
  
  :(
  
  push,
  
  "
  "eppadi naan thaan athunu kandupidithirkal" <<<<<
  
  yaaru kandupidithaargaL?
  eppo kandupidithaargaL?
  edhai kandupidithaargaL?
  
  
  
  
  

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