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Topic started by madhu on Wed Dec 27 3:24:44 2006. [Full View]

´Õ ¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ý ÀÂ½õ (episode 1)

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From: madhu on Wed Apr 22 23:44:30 2009. [Full View]

adutha kadhai ezhudhalAmA ? vENAmA ?

thakkALi, muttai ellAm vilai iRangi irukkAnnu gavanichuttu appuRam ezhudhalAm //
From: pavalamani pragasam on Thu Apr 23 0:09:30 2009. [Full View]

thakkaaLi, muttaiyellaam romba old fashion! oorengum, ulagengum padakkunnu shoe-vai kazatti eRiyaRathuthaan latest trend!
From: NM on Thu Apr 23 0:12:38 2009. [Full View]

pavalamani pragasam wrote:

thakkaaLi, muttaiyellaam romba old fashion! oorengum, ulagengum padakkunnu shoe-vai kazatti eRiyaRathuthaan latest trend!
yes, you're right! $$$$$$$$ mitcham! athuvum pinji-pOna shoes innum mEl
From: pavalamani pragasam on Thu Apr 23 0:15:35 2009. [Full View]
From: madhu on Thu Apr 23 3:36:10 2009. [Full View]

latest trend therinjukittadhu nalladhA pOchu..

ippOdhaikku rest edukkalAm
From: pavalamani pragasam on Thu Apr 23 5:02:22 2009. [Full View]

thambikku aanaalum avaiyadakkam jaasthi! veeN kavalaiyellaam pattukittu!
From: madhu on Thu Apr 23 6:48:04 2009. [Full View]

pavalamani pragasam wrote:

thambikku aanaalum avaiyadakkam jaasthi! veeN kavalaiyellaam pattukittu!

apdi illa akka...

current trend theriyAma nAn en style-a kadhai ezhudhinA bata store-sukku pOttiya kadai vaikira aLavukku kAlaNigaL kuvinjuttA ? appuram ippadi sirikka mudiyAmal pOyi ipdi sirkira mAdhiri aayidum..

adhAn
From: pavalamani pragasam on Thu Apr 23 12:46:15 2009. [Full View]

bata kadaikku pOttiyaa kadai vachchi kaasa aLLuRathukku kasakkavaa seyyum?
pallu udaiyaama irukka trickaa duck paNNavum, laddu maathiri catch pidikkavum theevira payiRchi edukkavum!
pasi mEla vitteRinchavan romba 'naakareegamaa' avar mEla padaama side-aa eRinjathaa pEttila sollirukkaan! aanaa, athukkaava risk ellaam edukka mudiyaathillaiyaa? enavE muthalil kooRiyapadi training edukkavum, Ethaavathu thoththal cricket playeridam!!! puthu seruppu kadaikku partner thEvaippattaal naanirukkEn kai kodukka!
From: suvai on Mon Sep 7 10:19:05 2009. [Full View]

madhu nga,
azhaga...noolila ......"magizhambu" korkaraarpola ezhuthikitu vareenga....onga varnanai is just too good......from pul veli to vaanam to pudavai vannam ...awesome...mazhai na namma manasu colorum grey aah poguthu...adhi kaalai na manasum velicham aaguthu.....athu mattumaa....ovoru characterum....strong ah manasila pathiya vaikara ezhuthum pakuvam iruku.....very effective writing.nga....

"eversilver paathrey saamaan" reminded me of that voice one cannot forget...heheheheh
From: madhu on Mon Sep 7 10:25:23 2009. [Full View]

oh.. thanks suvai-nga..

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