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Topic started by Querida on Tue Jun 7 0:33:47 2005. [Full View]

left unsaid
letters strung together
break, swim, falter and re-emerge...
the palimsest of guilt.
is it sin?
is it stupidity?
is it vain to judge words,
that are not written with care and flourish,
indecipherable scribbles vye for the attention of one.
even ink cares not to flow steadily,
their meanings too trivial to spell out,
a line , a word , an idea long left unsaid in the way you pronounce it
so stubborn they remain struggling towards
what was first sparked.
and now lay hidden and intentionally lost
its themes too proverbial to leave unmarked.
influences interfere breathing ignorance as their will
yet writer too is guilty of burying alive
that which is safe from ridicule
better left unsaid or so it is convinced.
but how does one know unless one utters...splutters
scratches out weakly the mundane
to trick the naive
yet still cause magician to wonder
is this real?
is this mine?
who speaks for me?
who keeps me from glory with the little that i know?
the little i ache to share and hunger to cherish as one's own

all that it contains is life
how true, how not, how so?
and anything to say that is not what i meant at all.

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From: Querida on Tue Oct 23 23:54:05 2007. [Full View]

will a fortune
ever read the truth?
that all should know:
what insight into the fore
you seek
will be shown due
tomorrow!

mind and memory
crafty sabateurs
malicious in their
concern with what
was told to you
will occur
ONLY AFTER
it has eventualized
its present presence

therefore my materialized
mon petit fou*
you never will know what's
wrought afore it was
ever mentioned to be

realization is your only
recognition of happenedstance

our own truthy trues lays bare
gasps real air pour vous*:
vraiment, vrai, la vérité absolue*:

"Happiness is willed, made, shared
not Happened-made"

the following phrases are in french
*my little fool
*for you
**really, real, the absolute truth
From: Querida on Tue Oct 23 23:56:46 2007. [Full View]

two creatures
tethered
stalk each other
one brutalizer
one brutaled
one beater
one beaten
one's monstrosity
spins in angrish violence
the other's
pitiying crime
believes its fate
deserved....
From: crazy on Wed Oct 24 9:03:32 2007. [Full View]
From: Querida on Wed Oct 24 21:21:40 2007. [Full View]

Hi Crazy

just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?
From: Querida on Wed Oct 24 21:54:58 2007. [Full View]

*re-sound de sounds*

al-one-ways
di-vide-dee-di-vine
sub-mergeds in germed-suds
v-ainit-y aint vit v-anity
dul-drums um drul-dums
sin-sear-city, sin-scar-ity
found fou und fond
be-leave-ebbs-by-lies-be-sott-by-be-très-all
ad-ditch-shun...add-is-sham
al-one-ways

fyi
*und - and in deutsch
*très - very in francais
*re-sound de sounds*
From: pavalamani pragasam on Wed Oct 24 23:45:57 2007. [Full View]

Interesting, meaningful, poetic experiments!
From: crazy on Thu Oct 25 2:32:43 2007. [Full View]

Querida wrote:

Hi Crazy

just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?

nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so

From: chevy on Fri Oct 26 12:57:35 2007.

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crazy wrote:

Querida wrote:

Hi Crazy

just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?

nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so Smile

Speechless!! That good!!

From: crazy on Fri Oct 26 13:08:41 2007.

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chevy wrote:

crazy wrote:

Querida wrote:

Hi Crazy

just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?

nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so Smile

Speechless!! That good!!

wordless ..maybe

From: NM on Sun Oct 28 20:57:01 2007. [Full View]

queri :

I love the last three ...different from the rest and it has something that wants you to read those again n again

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