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Uyirae en Uyirae - Part I

Topic started by rsubras on Sat Sep 26 5:48:21 2009. [Full View]

P.S: Hi Guys It is nice to be back after a longgggggggg time.... I am only trying to continue the story that I have started almost an year ago..... Ippothan continue panna aarambichirukken....pazhasai konjam edit panni...trim panni... so please bear with me for atleast one more post till i complete this one...


Athu oru kaalai velai. athikaalai velai lam illa... konjam athiga neram aagi vitta kaalai thaan... aduthaduthu snooze panni vida patta insult thaangama oru vazhiya antha mobile alaram adikkarathai stop pannirunthathu. ithukellam konjam kooda feel aagama, antha veyil sutteritha kaalaiyilum oru kaaLai (athaanga Bull Smile) thannoda kaalai (leg) neeti sugamaga paduthirunthathu. camera va apadiye leg la irunthu aarambichu konjam konjama mela Joom panneengana (vijaykanth style la zoom pannunga) rendu pillow ku nadula oru dirty fellow voda mugam theriyutha.....avar thaaanga indha kadhaiyin Nayagan Chinnu...ennada ithu Chin -nu, cheek -ku, lips -u nu lam peru vaipanga la nu yosikareengala...avanoda appa enamo avanukku Chinnasamy ngra thannoda thatha perai thaan aasai aasai ya vachaaru...... aana enna prayajonam...intha SMS kaalathula namakku podura dress lernthu, sappidara sappatai cook panra time varai ethaiyume surukki thane pazhakkam...... athan Chinnasaamy ngra thannoda azhagana perai surukki Chinnu nu vachikittan...


Chinnu voda family oru azhagana, niraivana family... government employee Appa... Highways department la velai paarkararu...Amma home maker.... ore thangachi Shwetha BSc final year student.... Chinnu oru Gen-X jenmam...i mean..Gen-X gentleman... Engineering mudikkara 90% graduates maathiri avanum pathu manikku office poitu, irava, pagala, kulira, veyila nu ethuvume theriyatha nerathula veedu thirumbara oru typical IT Employee..athunalathan paarunga, kadigaaram ettu maniyai thaandi avasarama odinalaum, ethukkume asarama nammaalu thoongikittu irukan..

"dei anna...... office ku time aagaliya..innum ennada thoookam" nu kettukitte ulla vara... ithu avanoda anbu thangai Shwetha... one moment wait panni paarkira thannoda anbu annanai, next moment washbasin la irunthu oru mug thanni pidichittu vanthu avan face la peechi adikkira..... kanavula ularikittu irunthavan intha unexpected attack la alarikittu enthirukkiraan.... para para nu enthiruchi kann muzhichi paartha kai la mug oda sirichikitte nikkara swetha...avanukku vantha kobathukkku semmaiya adi pinniruppan... but antha samayathula intha pasangaloda amma Mrs.Varalakshmi Rajasekhar entry tharaanga...

(Varalakshmi, their mother comes inside)

Chinnu: Amma..paarunga ma intha kazhuthaiya...nalla thoongitu iruntha en mela thanni ya adichitta

Swetha: thanni adichittu thoongarathu than thappu.... thoongara oruthana thanni adichu ezhupparathu thappe ilae

Chinnu: iva vaaiyai paarunga... college padikkira ponnu mathiriya nadanthukkara... nonsense...

Swetha: podaa Dog.... ettu manikku kooda asarama thoongikittu irukkara nee mudhalla software engineer maathiri nadanthukko...appuram ennai sollu

Varalakshmi: sari podhum di....anna ku konjamaachum mariyathai kodu...enna than irunthalum unnai vida periyavan

Swetha: periyya ivan.... paarunga ma ivanala en friends mathi la enakku maanam poguthu

Varalakshmi: en enna panninan?

Swetha: en friend malaavika irukka illa? anniku ava namma veetukku vanthappo eee nu pallai kaamichittu vazhinjittu irukkan

Chinnu: acho...illave illa ma...actually en pallu la oru chinna problem... antha ponnu oru BDS student aache. Adhu than ava kitta pallai thiranthu kaamichu kettutu irunthaen.athai intha pisasu thappa soluthu..

Swetha: adappavi......!!! Amma...nambave nambatheenga... konjam kooda koochame illama eppadi pesaran paarunga...

Chinnu: (samalichufies) ada...en pallu la koocham irunthathu nalathan ava kitta pesinaen.... Satyam ah ma...

Swetha: vidarathu reelu.. ithula Sathyam, Inox, Studio 5 nu udans vidaran ma...

Varalakshmi: sari podhum unga sandai... chinnasamy..nee poi kulichittu office kilambara vazhiya paaru....dee swetha..nee college po vendama......... En rendu perum ippo kaalai la nerathula mallukku nikkareenga

Chinnu: Mallukku nikkala ma... mallu vana iva friend maalu kaga ninuttu irukkom Very Happy

Swetha: deii.... Maalu vam maalu....iru iru...maalu voda aalu, baalu nu oruthan irukan... avan vanthu, un pallai odaippan.... appo theriyum unakku entha pallu la problem nu

Chinnu: hehee...ok ok sister... ithukkelam kochikkalama... lets make peace Very Happy

Varalakshmi: podhum da unga vilayaatu.... nee poi kuli po....Shwetha... un tiffin box la sappadu eduthu vachirukkaen..eduthuttu college kilambu po

Ippadiyaga, ovvoru morning layum Chinnu veeetula usual ah nadakkara antha casual convo mudivukku vanthuchu... Chinnu rushes to the bathroom for performing his early morning duties, while Shwetha leaves for her college...
Chinnu voda parents, native Tanjore ngrathunala, avanga veetula sappadu eppavume special ah irukkum.... athu lunch oh, illa breakfast oh illa dinner oh ethuvanalum irukkatum.... Ovvoru naalum vitha vithama sappadu senju vaippanga... Indraiya menu, ven pongal, idli, kesari and arisi uppuma...Shwetha vum ava appavum erkanave saptutu, avangavanga work place ku kilambi poittanga... Chinnu mattum than baaki... Varalakshmi amma, dining table la avanukku sappadu eduthuvachittu, paiyan ready aagittu sappida varathuku wait pannitu irukkanga.... 8:30 ku bed room vittu velila vanthavan..... nithanama ovvoru velaiyaiyum mudichittu, arakka parakka 9:45 ku dress pannitu odi varaan hall ku....

Chinnu: amma..amma... en watch ah engae vachae...

Varalakshmi: en da.. night thooongumbothu kanda idathula pottutu kaalaila tension nerathula thedarathu.... ithukku than naan appave sonnaen

Chinnu: sari podhum ma..ippo advise ketka neram illae...watch ah eduthu kodu

Varalakshmi: en da ippadi erinju vizhare.. T.V stand mela irukku paaru un watch..eduthukko

Chinnu: 10 mani ku onsite la irunthu oru call irukku....erkanave ennoda manager en mela oru gaanda irukkaru... ithula meeting ku late ah ponena mirugama maariduvaaru...

Varalakshmi: en unga manager enna Gaandaa mirugama? :p

Chinnu: haiyyo amma... unga mokkai ya kettu koba padarathukkku kooda neram illae...... (quickly puts on his shoes) naan varen...

Varalakshmi: dei thambi.. itho paaru sappadellam eduthu vachirukkaen..saaptutu poppa...

Chinnu: Time eh illama...so sorry... ippo eating ah vida meeting than enakku mukkiyam...sariya... Bye bye

Varalakshmi: dei dei... ennada.. kaalaila sappidalai na udambu kettu poidum kannna.... please konjamaachum saptutu po da

Chinnu: oru neram sappidalai na onnum aagidaathu... erkanave intha company sernthathu la irunthu semmaiya fat aagitaen nu ellorum solraanga... ithu vayira.. illa MRF tyre ah nu en friends lam gindal panraanga.... so intha maathiri high calories sappta than udambu kettu pogum....

Varalakshmi: athukkaga onnume sappidama vayithai kaaya poduviya

Chinnu: (stylish tone) no no no.... enga office food court la vidha vidhama sappadu kidaikkum.... meeting mudinja pinadi sandwich and juice saaptupen... I am in diet u know.........Vartta.....

thannoda Hand vachu senja Veetu sappattai vittutu Sandwich nu etho bread ah sappida poguthe intha pillai ena nondhu konde, padi thaandi pattini yaga pogum maganai antha padi thaanda pathini Varalakshmi ammal kavalaiyodu paarthu kondirukka, thann honda shine bike ai kilappi kondu office selgiraan Chinnu

[Scene-2]

The clock has already ticked ten past ten when Chinnu reached his office amidst the morning traffic at chennai that moved at a snail's pace. A tensed Chinnu hurriedly entered office and scampered past his colleagues who wished him good morning, to his cubicle. Before his manager notices, he should settle in his cubicle, open the PC and any application to give an impression that he has come long ago and is busily working. He is already ten minutes late for the meeting...but nevertheless busy ah irukkara maathiri scene kaamicha thappika mudiyutha nu paarkalam nu he thinks....This has been the daily routine for Chinnu who has earned the reputation of a regular late comer. Vaangatha thittu illa from team lead or the manager or the on site coordinator, but Chinnu just could not change his habit even a bit. Yaarukavathu birthday, marriage nu wish panrathuna kooda, he would not wish on the same day...avanoda habit padi, Be-late(d) ah than wish pannuvan...

As Chinnu was gazing through his outlook inbox for the day's mails, his next cubicle colleague parthi comes near him.

Chinnu: Dei machaan ..enga team pasanga lam meeting poitaangala..? you know..actually i was held up in a critical task..i mean...

Parthi: dei enkitaye un peter ah kaatariya, nethi namma manager 10'0 clock meeting ku kandippa ellorum nine ku varanum nu sonappo, fine fine nu thalai aatitu, vazhakkam pola Ten Ten ku variye da.... kaalailaye un mela kaari thuppitu meeting ku poirukkaru manager with shanki, susi and Jaanu alone...

Chinnu: sari vidu...kaata vendiya film kaati nan avara cool pannikaren.....

Parthi: podaang....sari po..nee epadiyum thiruntha porathillae... namma Jaanu endra janaki yoda engagement next week varuthu la... we are collecting Rs.50 from everyone, unnoda kaasu pending...eduthu vai athai....

Chinnu: dei aniyayam da... athu than marriage ku gift vaangi tharuvom la... engagement ku ennada panna poreenga aalukku 50 Rs collect panni?

Parthi: namma team saarba oru cake vaangitu poi engagement couple avangala vetta solla porom..... cake vettumbothu balloons lam parakka vittu jamaaika porom.....

Chinnu: athellam Wedding day ku thaanda intha mathir cake vaangi vetta solvaanga da..engagement anniku ethuku thaniya oru vetting day?

Parthi: It is team decision..nee pulambama paisa va edu..

Chinnu (aluthuthukonde): Sariyana vasool raja da nee.... Janaggi........un friend kitta dabbu nagi ma.... intha nerathula dog ennai paduthuthu paaru

Parthi: dei mooduda...call mudichittu Jaanu and team varaanga paaru....

[Shanki endra Shankar, Jaanu endra Janaki and Sushi endra Susheela return from their onsite call]

Sushi : hidaa chinnu, as usual innikum un punctuality puncture aayiducha

Chinnu: hehee.. enna panrathu sushi.. nilamai appadi.... intha meeting kaga breakfast kooda sappidama odi vanthen theriyuma

Shanki: that doesnt motor da....u didnt make it to the meeting anyhow....entha oru velai seriathilum pretend panrathukkum correct ah attend panrathukkum vithiyasam ithu than

Jaanu: Shokka sonnae shanki..paiyan enna solrathu theriyama shake aagitan paaru...

Chinnu: sari sari.... overaa ottatheengappa....

Shanki: sari da free ya vidu.... enakku semmaiya pasikkuthu..come on lets go to Food court and have something to eat...Client kitta pesi pesi thaavu theernthu pochu enakku

Chinnu: hmm ok..i too will have something to korichify... lets go folks.........

[So antha 5 member team proceed to Food court for breakfast]

Scene-3
[Venue: Food Court]

Shanki: Guys...naan poi ellorukkum bill pottutu varen..wait pannunga.... Jaanu nee as usual cornflakes than sappiduve...others..enna sappida poreenga

Parthi: enakku idly solluda

Sushi: enakkum..

Shanki: ok cool..unakkennada Chinnu

Chinnu: I am going for vegetable sandwich da..

Shanki: sari..... oru nalla place ah paarthu settle aagunga... naan poitu order pannitu vaangitu varen..Jaanu..neeyum vaama...

Sushi: pasangala..anga oru table gaaliya irukku paarunga..lets go there.....

[Ellorum table la poi utkara, Chinnu coke tin vaangitu joins them]

Chinnu: hey guys..coke kudikareengala.... Food court la vaikkara thanni kudicha thaagam adangave maatenguthu..... athan coke tin vaanginen...

Parthi: poda.. 10:30 is coffee time for me.. naan coffee sappiduven

Chinnu: milk powder la podara namma vending machine coffee thaane..uvvee...athai eppadi da kudikare..... over coffee udambukku aavathu da....itho paarthiya diet coke...calories kammi.. not bad for health.....

Parthi: enna machi panrathu.... pazhagidichu..vida mudilaye...

[Few moments later Shanki and Jaanu join them with the food items and they settle down eating, chit chatting]

Sushi: enda shanki..namma Jaanu three years ah love pannitu iruntha paiyanaiye kattika veetula successful ah sammatham vaangitaa engagement varai kondu vanthutta...nee five years ah oru love story ottitu irukkae... eppo athai marriage stage la arangettram panna porae

Shanki: Hmm... avalukku enna..athai paiyanai love pannina..so perisa entha problemum varama easy ah matter mudinju pochu...en kathai appadiya.... appa kitta antha ponnai kootitu poi...intha ponnu enakku etha ponnu pa.. ivalaiye katti vaingapa nu sonna...Mavane un taste ku etha ponna iruntha pathathu da...namma caste ku etha ponna irukanum nu ketkararu...enna solla solra... etho pechu vaarthai nadanthuttu irukku.... paarkalam

Sushi: pechu vaarthai ethanai varusham than nadathuve..seekiram oru mudiva solli kalyana sappadu podu...

Jaanu: athellam irukkatum..intha Parthi paiyan oru ponnukku nool vitutu irukkanae antha kathaiya ketkaliya nee...

Sushi: yaaru...antha Punjabi ponnu Pavithra thaane... theriyum theriyum...

Jaanu: enna theriyum..avan nethiku avala propose panna poitu bulb vaangitu vanthathu theriyuma....

Shanki and Sushi (chorus) : Wowww...theriyave theriyaathe.... dei paarthi...enga antha story ah sollu...

Paarthi (embarassed): yey...Jaanu.. puhleeease....vittudu...maanathai vaangathe...

Jaanu: haha..ithula enna irukku da...cool it machi... etho oru loosu paiyan kodutha idea la...ivan oru greetings um rose um eduthukittu nethikku Pavithra cubicle la kondu poi ava illatha nerathula vachirukan.... ava athaiyellam paarthathum semmaiya tension aagi....... yaaroda velai ithu nu koochal potirukka..... paiyan ava kitta poitu ithellam unakkaga than nu solrathukku yeh teri liyae pavi.. nu solla start panninavan ava kannula therinja kobatha paarthu mirandu poi...teriliyae pavi..enakku therilayae... nu maathi ularitu odi vanthuttan..hahaha...

[Everyone laughs at Paarthi....]

Shanki: enda dhairiyam ah solla mudiyathavanukku lam ethukkuda love-u?

Paarthi: sari vidu.... naanavathu oru level varaikkum ponaen..aana namma Chinnu evlo naala antha Swapna ponnai thoorathula irunthe love waves pass pannitu irukkan... Intha mokkai murali ya evanavathu ottureengala....

Chinnu: ennai enda vambuku izhukkareenga... en kaathal konjam aazhamanathu illiya....athunala than naan aazham paarthutu irukaen..... ava kitta solrathukku kaalam paarthuttu irukaen...hehee

Paarthi: thoda...love ah solrathukku vazhiya paaru da na..ipadi vazhiyare...

[Their friend Hari arrives]

Hari: dei chinnu..mama...nee route vittutu irukkiyae un aalu Swapna inniku white Salwar la bright ah devathai mathiri summa super ah vanthirukka da...ippo Cafeteria la than iruka

Chinnu: appadiya....ohhh...etho wedding poitu inniku late ah varuva nu ava team mate sonnan..... antha costume la than vanthirukkala office ku.... then itz a must watch...naan kilambaren..guys...see u later

Jaanu: ennamo Sify oda cinema review maathiri sollitu poraan..must watch nu...

Sushi: dei vaangi vacha sandwich ah sapidama odariya.... nee sariyana jollu da...

Shanki: avan summavae avalai pathi uruguvan... nee vera yen da hari avana ethi vidare....

Hari: hmm..just thought of sharing this info..satharanama oru alukku dress la vantha kooda azhagu nu solvaan..inniku nijammave super dress la vanthirukka....ivan mattum avalai paarthan na...mayangiye vizhundhuvuan

[Venue: Cafteria]

Chinnu goes to the cafeteria situated in the right side of the Food court..Swapna was not there..all other friends were there....oh..probably Coffee vaangitu vara poiruppa, thinks Chinnu and prefers to wait for Swapna taking a corner seat, some distance away from their desk...As his heart pumps up awaiting Swapna in a supposedly cute dress, his mind pens up a poem in that cycle gap....

"Vennira Salwar-il nadanthaadum Perazhage,
un vazhiyile Selvaar-in manathai panthaadum un azhage.."

ippadi oru bit-tu Chinnu manasula uruvaagitu irukkumbothu avanoda kavithaiyin nayagi Swapna Coffee cup oda thannoda idathukku thirumbi vanthu kondirunthal...Vantha antha Ponnu looked deep into namma Chinnu's eyes who was ogling her a few meters apart..Avalai aavaludan kannodu kann paartha andha second, solla mudiyatha maatrangal pala happened to Chinnu...His heart beat rapidly, the face started sweating and he felt butterflies flying in his heart...."Idhudhan kaadhal enbatha...idhayam pongi vittatha..." ena avan ninaithu kondirukkumbothe, the butterflies shifted their position from heart to stomach, kangal soruga, namathu kathaiyin nayagan Chinnu mayakkam adichu keezhe vizhunthan <br/><br/>

[To be Continued...]


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